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Guts is at the eclipse. Everything he knew that was real, everyone he had come to know, everone he had ever loved, are now forfeit.

This picture took place at what seems to be the worst possible thing that could ever happen to anyone. Like the torture one would receive in hell.

Guts and Berserk © Kentaro Miura

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Hmmm... I think this is really good. I especially like the demon's claw and all the detail you put into the blood.

But I can think of a few things that are bothering me too. Like his mouth. It has a nice shape to it, but the teeth are a little odd. Their curving with the shape of the lips rather than his jaw, and on the left side things are even stranger. It's almost like the teeth are curving outwards.

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I guess I have a little idea to go with this critique too. The tears on the right side are overlapping the blood, but not mixing. I think it would be interesting to see them flow together. *shrugs*

Don't for a second think that those tears are bad though! I really like them. I often have trouble with liquid things like that.
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May 27
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Canon PowerShot SX110 IS
1/20 second
F/2.8
6 mm
400
May 27, 2009, 1:00:34 PM

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